
I’m working on my tenth book right now, and late in the process I concluded something that never occurred to me until now. The closer we get to the present day in our novel, the more we are locked into real historical details. Of course, that’s a double-edged sword. On the one side, I don’t have to worry about concocting a plot. The story line is already done for me. On the other side, I’m constrained by historical accuracy—or at least, what passes for accuracy. Unless I’m writing alternative fiction, I can’t change the course of events.
The way I see it, there are three kinds of Historical Fiction authors: the first writes about a totally made-up character in a historical setting, which frees up the author to do anything they like, within reason. The second type of historical novel centers on a character related to a historic person, like a spouse, younger brother, favorite comrade, or servant—that sort of thing. This author will often touch on events, and is also free to create a totally fabricated parallel story. The third type of historical novel is more of a biographical fiction, usually about a king or famous person. This requires a ton of research and dedication to veracity. As you may have guessed, I ascribe to the third option.
My first four books covered the eleventh century, where we have a maddening dearth of historical information. We have the Anglo-Saxon Chronicle, which gave us little paragraphs that left a lot to the imagination. When you consider that the Bayeux Tapestry is our major source about the Battle of Hastings, as well as a chronicle written about fifty years after the fact (Orderic Vitalis), and another written a hundred years later (Wace, Roman de Rou), we—or rather, historians—really have to extrapolate. Everybody seemed to have a different opinion. That gave me a lot of head-scratching, but allowed the creative juices to flow.
My last several books are about Plantagenet kings starting with Richard II. As expected, the period I am writing about is much more expansively documented. And now I’m up to Henry V. He reigned six hundred years ago, still long enough in the past that one would think I’d have plenty of “blank spaces” to fill in with my imagination. Fat chance! It seems that Henry couldn’t take a nap without someone making note of it. And there doesn’t seem to be as much disagreement between historians as to what happened.

Well, OK, I exaggerate a tad. But the point is, it seems his reign was more closely documented than ever before. And frankly, I got stuck. Why? Because I’m locked in to a timeline that is not particularly interesting. I want to write about Henry’s life, since most people know little about him past the Battle of Agincourt. Alas, much of his later story consisted of a long series of interminable sieges. And, for the most part, sieges were boring. We do get an occasional bout of stimulating action, thank goodness.
Unfortunately, there’s a lot of uninteresting stuff tying it all together. If I’m bored with it, I certainly can’t make it stimulating to my readers.
So what’s an author to do? Can I just jump from one high point to another? It’s very tempting. Can I do that without losing the continuity? Not really. I like to compare my novel-writing to building a human body. The first draft is the skeleton. I concentrate on the historical events, which involves the most extensive research. I don’t spend much time worrying about personalities and storyline. I think of my second draft as the muscles and sinews. The history is in place. I can concentrate on tying the events together, and figuring out why something happened, and how. Connect the dots, I like to say. The third draft is the skin and makeup. I can concentrate on the human interest, and this draft usually lightens things up for me. I can add further dialogue and throw in motivations, giving more dimension to my protagonist’s character. That stuff becomes filler, but I am writing fiction after all. This is what separates us from the historian, who doesn’t have the license to dive into a person’s brain.
This time around, I have yet to get through the first draft. It’s just dragging for me. One potential solution is yet more research. I’ve starting buying books that tell the history from the French point of view, which is definitely a different angle. It doesn’t hurt that the French civil war and violent rioting in Paris impacts heavily on the English army’s progress. Those activities got me halfway through the book. I just have to figure out how to keep it up!
A further potential solution is to give another historical person more prominence than I normally do. The interaction between Henry V and Philip the Good, for instance, is not unimportant. And what about the Dauphin, the future Charles VII who makes such a mess of things when he has John the Fearless murdered? Oh yes, that is pretty juicy. So, perhaps as an author, I need to crawl out of my comfort zone and do something different. Expand the perspective rather than make up more filler. After all, my ultimate goal is to make history more interesting to the reader, and to do so, it has to be entertaining to me. I’m a firm believer that this is possible. I just hope I have the skill to do it.



























